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Post by Linwë Culnámo on Nov 6, 2006 17:23:57 GMT -5
Okay, this is just a few things that I am working and pride myself on. Please do not be afraid to hurt my feelings but post what you think....I will post what I have so far. Here it is:
Prolouge
As I know this story will never be published or read by a human or elf or dwarf or even any population I feel I must add this. And if you do read this (and I am alive) please review comment even hate mail me! I do not care! I just need to know what you think.
Right now I am typing on a school labtop, no one knowing what I am doing, and as I write this story along I might be in my closet, my bedroom, or my school but I still love to write. Please read past this small bit and countinue on this small story which might turn out to be quite large in the whole.
-Kelsey Van Vlack
Part 1
The Past
Among the many legends and story’s of this world the most known one is that of the tale of Shakki. Shakki was a great warrior and king who ruled this land, he had an air of strength an’ strong will. He led
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Post by Linwë Culnámo on Nov 7, 2006 20:23:14 GMT -5
his warriors and all of the men who are fighters in this world and brought them to the battle of Harksh, where already a huge battle was raging aginst men and elves.
He fought and was eventually killed, the race of men wavered and began to fall, the elves ruled these lands now, there knowledge of the area and wildlife benefiting them even more than ever. And so they ruled. Ruled with knowledge and brulity.
And then something happened, the races of men started to appear, though there
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was no one to pick up their throne no heir to reclaim it. And so it was given to
lessar men who did not deserve the posistion.
Part II
Current World
The world of Numiarf has changed but this has only been one small step in that of which is to happen in this tale and time. Though it seems that things have settled down and the elves and men are keeping to themselves, it will turn out that they need to join together to win this up-coming thing. The rangers have felt it. Smelt it, even breathed it. They know that something is coming. But they do not know what. All they know is that it is evil and will now try to distroy there world.
It now resides that not everyone can change the world by themselves, but maybe just maybe if they ban together they can. They can indeed.
Chapter I
It might have been that particular way the light shone that day, or it might have been that way that everyone seemed to be filled with life and joy that it seemed Eohas was busy today.
Peasents, Knights, Stable Boys, and even the Queen was about today. And though we may use the proper title of queen that is not who she is.
Well, yes, she is the rightful heir and she is supposed to be by marriage but she
actued more like a pesent than royalty. She would ride her horse with the KNights everyday, help the elders in helth and help the younger workers with
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there farms. She was adored in the land for she was almost perfect in everyway.
Breathing in the warm scents, Lia stepped out of the great stables where her horse and many other knights horses were kept. In the town they also had a place to keep birds, mostly Hawk’s and Eagles and a man who trained all of them.
Her hair was kept in a pony-tail kept in place only by a strap of leather, her clothing which wasn’t exactly the best was fairly clean and actually given to her by the queen,
“Lia, Lia!”
A voice yelled to her, she saw Tari coming closer towards her, the young girl was a strawberry blonde and quite cute at that. Lia kneeled and swept the young one into a embracing hug. “It’s good to see you too.” She laughed and gave Tari a quick hug.
The younger pesent returned the hug and she grinned, “You’ll never belive it, Lady Korin gave me a horse! Well a pony! But I can ride!” It was the happiest Lia had ever seen Tari, she gave the youth a kiss on the forehead.
“Lady Korin is a nice person. But, if you are to becomea knight well, you’ll have to learn fast.” Lia tilited her head and raised her eyebrows, “Come, get your mount and do not bother with a saddle, I will get Lundi.”
ooc// By NO permission can people use this plot line, entrance, prologue or characters
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